Saturday, December 19, 2009

Romantic perfume note?

Name of the perfume that i've got for my hubby's birthday who is abroad is ';Love Story.';


So how would this note go with it?


';Let this perfume sprinkle fragrance in our beautiful love story.';





Well, is it grammatically write? B'cause Im not sure whether both ';perfume'; and ';fragrance'; can come in this note.


Also is it romantic? Quite sure it is. lolRomantic perfume note?
it's fine.. but write should be right. and B'cause should be because.





but rather than your little blurb, I think it would be even better if you wrote an actual note from your heart.. could even be a little racy. If he's abroad, i think it might have more of an impact. Because, really at this distance, the fragrance isn't going to have any impact on your ';love story';.


Romantic perfume note?
perfume might be to girlie for a guy maybe you should try





';Let this cologne sprinkle fragrance ON our beautiful love story';
I would put ';Let this perfume sprinkle its fragrance into our beautiful love story:';
i think that sprinkle isnt the right word. you could avoid the perfume/fragrance thing with ';Let this add fragrance to our beautiful love story';


or something like that
well perfume is probably most romantic when it is given as a gift.
You are not being grammatically right (correct). What?
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if you could find a better word than fragrance, maybe it could work better.

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